Aloha Rachel,
Your portfolio was selected for review and received the following feedback. Please have the revise/update returned by next Wednesday, Jan 17, 2018. Type all revisions/updates in a different color or highlighted for easier identification. The revisions should address the two bullets under specific feedback
Specific Feedback:
- School Community Research - It would make the action plan more actionable if it were based on data, the statements provided do not appear to be data based. Please include data that is part of the Comprehensive Needs Assessment (CNA) and readily available (LDS, SQS, SBA, school level screener, etc). This data would also provide measurable outcomes to be addressed in the action plan.
- It would also be beneficial to add how you came to the conclusion, based on the school/community data, that those specific ideas/topics should be presented.
- The participant states: "I will be using Google Classroom as a tool to enhance student literacy, teacher to student communication, and teacher communication. The purpose of my presentation is to inform my colleagues about Google Classroom and also suggest it as a way for teachers to communicate on campus." - Please provide a connection between the literacy data and the use of Google Classroom to make an impact on the student literacy? What was the purpose of looking at the school profile and data?
- You did a lot of reading of articles,etc.and watching videos in the beginning of the course. How was the new learning from the course content applied in the "action" part of the course?
If you have any questions, please let me know.
Thank you,
 | Teri Ann Lin 21st Century Classroom & Global Education Lead Trainer |
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